Thursday, 26 February 2015

Haiku 9

When I am lonely

And go for a walk, I see
Everywhere the same
Autumnal dusk.

The monk Ryozen

(Sabishisa ni

Yado wo tachi ide
Izuku mo onaji
Aki no yugure.)

Feels like winter just rolled in
on an Easterly wind

smelling of sulphur
and dead bonfires.

Alan McGinn ‏@Chainsaw_McGinn

We found pieces
of the doomed spacecraft
littering a remote road
in the Mojave Desert.
BBC News)

Things sucked into a black hole
aren't permanently lost –
only until the end
and re-birth of the Universe.


Andrew Rader ‏@marsrader

Pitch black still.
How quickly the fig and prickly pear
gave way to the clementine
and chestnut again.

Each year seems to fly faster.

Alex Andreou

Stunning leaf colour
and mass of ladybirds.
One being eaten by spider!

iain green ‏@naturebygreen

Mass of stupidities. Yes.
Untrodden path.
No help, on the contrary.
An alien machinery.

Vladimir Ilyich Lenin

Fog burning off
in the Thames Valley

and an almost summer sun.
Heading for Cheltenham.


Listening to the surprisingly deep tones
of rain on the window I realise
I should have gone out
when I first had the idea.

Andrew Brown ‏@seatrout

Autumn begins today.
Time of crystallising breath.
Crunching leaves.
Spectacular light over the sea.
Hibernation. Rediscovery.

myfot ‏@thisismyfot

More here, and links to the rest.

Tuesday, 24 February 2015

Tautology 7

Horribly colonial

"From whence" is fine. Idiomatic English has many mild tautologies: reason why, time when, man who.... (Oliver Kamm of the Times)

But don't telegraph your punches. Take people by surprise. Avoid starting a sentence with “Alas...” you haven’t told the reader what's sad yet. Same goes for “the devastating war that killed four out of six of the country’s youth”. The stats tell the story.

"A graduated hierarchy of measures, what does that mean?" (BBC Breakfast Most hierarchies are graduated.)

All you remember is the horrible colonial past. (Speaker on Sunday Morning Live about the Kohinoor, the Elgin Marbles etc. It’s like saying “By the way, colonialism was wrong”.)

brand new
Don’t go too overboard. (Once you’re overboard, you’re overboard.)

escape from

exquisite delight

frozen in formaldehyde (Many hits on Google. You preserve specimens in formaldehyde at room temperature, or put them in the freezer.)

In an age when the tip of the devastating iceberg that is sexual assault in the military is only beginning to emerge... ( It's the sexual assaults that are devastating, not the metaphorical iceberg.)

insulated ivory tower
It’s a mundane world.
(What would you expect from the mundus?)

light-winged dryad of the trees (Keats Dryads are wood nymphs.)

MGM is closing after amassing crippling debts of more than $4bn. (That level of debt is obviously crippling, there’s no need to say so. Either “crippling debts” or “debts of more than $4bn”.)

old history



Purple tomatoes that could help to slow the ravages of ageing still alive today. (slow ageing – it's like talking about the plague/spectre/scourge of something you don't like)

The caterpillar absorbs poisonous toxins from the vine, and secretes them onto its spines. (Life on Fire, Eden. All toxins are poisonous, and all poisons are toxic.)

The parks are bursting full of exotic flowers. (Saturday Kitchen full of, bursting with)

The virus, which scientists first discovered in Britain a month ago… (Times 2012 Did they discover it a second time somewhere else? How can you discover something twice? Or was it the first time it’s been spotted in Britain?)

This defeat shortly paved the way for the devastating Abbasid sack of Amorion, one of Byzantium's main cities. (@JamesThorne2 There is no kind way of sacking a city.)

underage minor

unrestrained free-for-all

utterly chronic

World War I “completely upended the old world order”.

More here, and links to the rest.